TAKE YOUR SCRIPT TO THE NEXT LEVEL
Lauren’s notes services are designed to provide you with the constructive, actionable feedback you need to turn your script into a polished, professional piece that stands out. She’ll help you identify what's working, what's not, and how to elevate your story to its fullest potential, giving you the confidence to share your script with the world.
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Perfect for that sharp comedy or dramedy. We'll focus on what makes your pilot pop: your unique voice, pacing, and how to nail that pilot structure.
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Dramas, sci-fi, and epics—this is for you. Lauren provides comprehensive notes to help you craft a pilot that sets up a compelling series, including world-building, character arcs and more.
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These notes cover everything from high-level story issues to scene-by-scene breakdowns. We'll analyze your structure, character development, theme, and dialogue to help you deliver a script ready for the screen. (200 page limit)